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Dreaming is for fools who never think about what's it like outside their window when they're staring at the rain when they're wondering just why these thoughts don't escape the brain. I never did believe in philosophy or legends that just try to trick me.

Living is a process that precedes the act of dying in your heart or in your soul it doesn't quite matter to me when I play with my words like a game of chess or a match of tennis if you prefer to say it simply.

I never did quite know. I never did quite care. I just watched it fall apart like the sun shooting a spark into the atmosphere: it'll never quite make it here.

When these stations fall like torrential rains and wash away these hopes and wishes I'll stand back and admire the destruction and the pain of people when they run and scream about things they've never seen and secretly never will and never can be part of the true suffering.

It's so exciting. I'm so undeserving of this view of holy matromony in terms of sleep and discomforting thoughts. I really don't care, though, why would I break this circle if the reasons that I see are broken down at the seams.

I never did quite know. I never did quite care. I just watched it fall apart like the sun shooting a spark into the atmosphere: it'll never quite make it here.

I never did quite know. I never did quite care. I just watched it fall apart like the sun shooting a spark into the atmosphere: it'll never quite make it here.

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Pushing a lover to love another. Are you turned on?


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The following comments are for "Casual Friday"
by Tyrant Monkey

fools?
The thoughts of those who dream outside the box are depressing and uplifting. This is your world. Bring the sun back or watch the floods come. Either way, it's your own doing.

You can't help but dream. We are all dreaming. For some reason, we think we're awake when our eyes are open.

Oh, and I'm not talking Matrix bs here. I'm talking the truth. ;D Destruction can be beautiful.

( Posted by: Darkshine Raven [Member] On: December 13, 2003 )

Y it's harder
I quite liked this piece tm. There's a really nice fluidity in the melonycholy.
very untyranical and sweet.
smithy

( Posted by: smithy [Member] On: December 14, 2003 )





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