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Anorexia and you...and me. Around that rosemary tree. We never know the facts until we jump the hurdles and we are in the race. Then we take one step too far. We fall and get bloody or possibly skin a knee...but it is taboo to get caught. It is a violation to be sent back to that world of normality of eating in full lengths with nothing stopping you, not even your brain. Anorexia screams at you now. Tells you to starve, does it not? Tells you to take those laxatives and that you are extra fat every day. Is it passive suicide? Is it bad self-esteem? We wish we could tell you. For now, all we can say is that Anorexia will rot you intil you are that skeletal whore that you want to be. Starve your self silly, little girl, because we are not stopping you...and you sure as hell will not stop until you reach your limit. Anorexia, you, and me. Sitting around that balding tree.

"Pretty girls make graves..." -Jack Kerouac


The following comments are for "Anorexia"
by MerryJayned

Oh Yes
Emotion! It doesn't matter whether negative or positive, you have captured it here. Closer to the heart, closer to the truth. Tell it.

( Posted by: Wilcobaby [Member] On: January 7, 2004 )

Awsome -Fo-Shawsome
wow, thats wonderfull. I liked the part from until you are that skelital whore u want to be on. my best friend is like that the skinnyer she gets, the skinnyer her defonition of perfection is

( Posted by: Amisamil [Member] On: February 21, 2004 )

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