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Standing in a crowd
But feeling alone and worthless
Maybe the pain will stop these feelings
You can see the cuts
I deny everything

The pain is my savor
It let's me feel numb from everything
The numbess is so good let it last forever

Tired of being lied to
Tired of hoping
Tired of the hatred and the sadness
just tired of everything

The pain makes everything go away
Pain seems like my only friend
The razor cuts my skin
It lets all the hurt out

My eyelids get heavy
Maybe sleep will takeover
I will sleep only for a little while
I do not plan on sleeping forever
Just until all the pain goes away


The following comments are for "A Lonely Feeling"
by FrEaK_oN_a_LeAsH

I'm still here...aren't I

( Posted by: demonspawn666 [Member] On: September 11, 2004 )

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