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I've gone numb inside.
I can't seem to feel my heart.
And I know that we'll just stand here.
And hope it doesn't fall apart.
And these feelings are so cold.
They're freezing me from the inside.
But forever we just stand here.
And hope it doesn't die.

And we hope it doesn't die.
And we hope it doesn't die.

And once again I find myself begging.
For someone to help me.
For someone to hold me.
For someone to believe in me.
And so it goes on again.
Me on my knees begging.
For my life to take a harder swing.
And miss my happiness again.

Pushing a lover to love another. Are you turned on?

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