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there are places where iv'e never been.
And places where my path shall never fade,
And though I swear i think I know the way most times.
my feet will ever stumble and I'll stray.

But let me put this down, this once.
and let the sands of time erase my name.
for i'll wander on my path a while and still my mind.
and let me do my thing here one more time...
I've never said a word about redemption,
Just hinted in a little line or two.
And though Ive tried to shed my light,
I'd like to mention...
that the dark is getting nearer all the time.
So let me put this down this once.
and let the years corrupt and hush my mind.
Cause I just would like to feel the flow of things to say,
Just let me do my thing here one more time...
It's ever been so up and down with all that tension.
with my back against the wall, and then i'm free.
but if you would let me have my rest and peace of mind...
I'm sure to get it right just one more time...

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The following comments are for "this madness."
by wally 5

i would really enjoy hearing these lyrics put to music. Very Dylanish! Write some more!

( Posted by: witchy woman [Member] On: December 14, 2003 )

nice flow
very nice and worldly too wally5. I saw your comment on one of Penelope rants, i think it was and thought you deserved a comment. You sounded like a decent and centred bloke. Sublte and wise at the same time - your piece I mean.
For guitar?? Or do you just write the lyrics like singing a song??

( Posted by: smithy [Member] On: December 16, 2003 )

keep em' comin
dude luv ur lyrics just throw em on some music.. me and my friends have a band and we could make the craziest tune for that seriously!!!!

( Posted by: noonespecial [Member] On: December 27, 2003 )

hey brandon i dont know if you remeber me buts its's Abby deme's friend and i thought that was really awsesome especialy the one about cutting. and yeh i just wanted to tell u that ok

( Posted by: u wont understand [Member] On: January 3, 2004 )

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