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Let Me Tell You
December 3rd, 2003 - December 7th, 2003

Sit down and allow me explain it all to you
This is something we both need in our lives
There's things in the past we've both been through
Two people turning what takes into what gives

If i try to hold the air inside my chest
you still always seem to take my breath away
Whenever my head is in need of some rest
my imagination likes to keep running astray

Hold me so close that there's no room for doubt
I like how you see me for who i really am
which will allow my true feelings to be let out
Possibilities are endless now that you have them

...i close my eyes in order to see...

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