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They always stuck together. Bob, Tom, and Dave never parted. Night and day they were always together. They went fishing for that nightís supper. Scouting the water looking for the biggest catch, as the others gathered around to admire it. Looking off into the distance they saw the dark gloomy skies, they could tell that a huge storm was about to hit. The wind started blowing like crazy throwing the waves high into the air. Dave thought that he had time to catch one more fish before they left. As he went to grab it a huge bluish- greenish wave came on top of him and drowned him in the dark deep ocean. Bob and Tom never saw him again. When they got home they spread the news about. The next day a lifeguard found the cold, wet, dead body of the pelican lying on the beach.



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