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The silence says more in seconds
Than i've heard you say in years.
The stain of the past remains-
Try to wash it away with tears.
So weary of the foolish game,
Of searching, finding, to dispose.
I am waiting, waiting... waiting
For our lives to meet... and close.
Your cuts have left very few scars
That i know time cannot heal,
Pain is far better than the numb that
Denying you would have me feel.

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V.


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The following comments are for "Poetry of Alienation"
by Edens_wench

very nice
i really like the rhyme and flow it has. the ending is what i liked best. i always look at poetry for potential in being songs, and i think this poem is capable of that. if you haven't already, you may want to pick up a guitar or some other instrument and make some music. heh :)

( Posted by: Veruca Salt [Member] On: December 11, 2003 )





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