Lit.Org - a community for readers and writers Advanced Search
 




Average Rating
8.33

(3 votes)


RatingRated by
8Unknown
8Unknown
9Viper9

You must login to vote

And through the darkness that sorounds me,
one simple rhyme is what confounds me,
drawing out this maddened need,
as with intent I do proceed,
my hands work with thier simple chores,
and to an end i'm searching for,
the quiet is my only friend
this empty room the means to an end,
And as these lines are formed in mind,
the peace within does sooth, is kind,
and after this I go to rest,
hoping i have done my best,
for after all it's hard to tell,
when you can't sleep
and your tired as hell.



Related Items

Comments

The following comments are for "burning the midnight oil"
by wally 5

Nice work
Nice poem. I can sure relate. These are pretty much the same thoughts I have when I'm working through the night, especially when I take a break and walk up and down the empty streets in the dark and quiet. You've done a good job of conveying that state of mind.

VG!

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: December 5, 2003 )

Good job...
You've got a way with words, great job!

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: May 14, 2004 )

wally 5
I have come across some of your poetry here, and I have to say, that I am very fond of your work...this is a wonderful piece, and other than a couple spelling errors, I like it just the way it is...you have quite a way with weaving your words together...I'm anxiously looking forward to more from you
Reba

( Posted by: Reba [Member] On: May 14, 2004 )





Add Your Comment

You Must be a member to post comments and ratings. If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!

All Fields are required

Commenting Guidelines:
  • All comments must be about the writing. Non-related comments will be deleted.
  • Flaming, derogatory or messages attacking other members well be deleted.
  • Adult/Sexual comments or messages will be deleted.
  • All subjects MUST be PG. No cursing in subjects.
  • All comments must follow the sites posting guidelines.
The purpose of commenting on Lit.Org is to help writers improve their writing. Please post constructive feedback to help the author improve their work.


Username:
Password:
Subject:
Comment:





Login:
Password: