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The world keeps on spinning. I try to grasp onto something to not make me lose control. A battle is on. Right and wrong, struggling to win. My mind is far from gone, lost in the wind. A tunnel for I am in. Darkness creeps all around in great zen. Decisions are to be made. Oh how it wants to go that other way. Pain is all around, visions of dark clouds. Sounds going wild, there are no children crying. Where have I been? Where will it be? Together for all will see.


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