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Jumping, leaping, soaring
They speak to me


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The following comments are for "Squirrels"
by demonspawn666

Heh, I liked the topic of this poem. So many times we get caught up in the world of complexity and emotion that we forget the simple earth. =D

However, I think you could have gone somewhere a bit more original with this. Not nessicarily with the ideas but with the words. Very good start though. Take care and keep writing.

( Posted by: Darkshine Raven [Member] On: December 8, 2003 )

Hahaha. Loved it! Especially froma guy named "demonspawn666"!!! lol

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: December 8, 2003 )

I talk to squirrels
squirrels are awesome!! yay...i love magical midget!!! you fell out of your chair!! haha..this poem was awesome cause yea it's awesome...put more stuff on here so i can read them...ok bye

( Posted by: FrEaK_oN_a_LeAsH [Member] On: December 11, 2003 )

I am grateful for all your comments but Viper i'm not a guy.

( Posted by: demonspawn666 [Member] On: December 30, 2003 )

that is not really fair to say since i was only correcting a mistake

( Posted by: demonspawn666 [Member] On: December 31, 2003 )

Nutty Me
squirrels of joy
crack my shell...
revealing the nut in me

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: July 30, 2016 )

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