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I get a funny feeling,
it comes from deep inside.
I get all mad and angry,
wanting to go and hide.

My doctor calls it depression,
my dad says it's just me.
But the thoughts and feelings,
no one will ever be able to see.

Some say I'm psycho,
some say I'm just weird.
It's like I'm a different person,
and the old me just disappeared.

I get really edgy,
I want to commit suicide real bad.
Then I get a headache,
followed by feeling sad.

I wish I could get help,
I wish it would go away.
Maybe if I keep praying real hard,
it will some day.

DJ Fire Flash, This probably explains why I'm weird at school man......I can hold it in anymore.



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The following comments are for "Am I Alone?"
by pumapunk

Ehehehe!
Yes... You are a weird little boy.. Well.. I like the poem. Kinda... Twizted... Me likes. Well.. Bai bai..

( Posted by: Tyrant Monkey [Member] On: October 21, 2001 )

pumapunks poem
It is interesting. Makes the reader guess why you have this feeling. You might want to throw a hint out or something.

( Posted by: mj20300 [Member] On: March 10, 2002 )





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