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My heart is racing. My eyes are aglaze. Thoughts run rampid in my head. Deep, dark, and wrong scream in my mine. Tempted by the sin. Forever will play this game. To those around me, will guess as to this way. I cannot help myself as I learn the many ways. Pains sears all around me. No one can see. I see the pain that no one fears. Lost in this pattern, hoping for a safe return. Praying to live out this very hour.

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