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Town of Broken Dreams

Verse 1

Take a dive

Dreams are barely alive

These people will bleed you dry

Then forget you when you fall

Chorus

Welcome to the town of broken dreams

Nothing’s as it seems

Smiling faces just a mask

There’s nothing here for me

Verse 2

Outside

The streets are barren of life

Buildings house division and strife

All betray each other now

(Chorus)

Bridge

The church bells ring

No peace on Earth

Voices now sing

Show us what we’re worth

(Chorus)


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Now, what was I saying...


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