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Do the Trees demand more wind

to rustle their beautiful leaves upon?

Does the Moon plea for more of night

to spread it's beams upon?

Has the Sun requested more days

to shine its light upon?

I reflect upon the graceful Tree

and marvel at it's elegance

to stand so firm

and bend it's way toward Heaven.

I mystically gaze upon the Moon

to bask in it's eternal patterns

of Heaven's expressions.

I warm in the Sun's pure light

to acknowledge it's revolutions

upon all time and space

as a solace

in it's solar Heaven.


C.L. Mareydt d23

C.L. Mareydt

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by C.L. Mareydt

Does my keyboard demand more fingers to have typed upon?

Does my consciousness require more treacle to dull its thoughts upon?

Here's a goodbye to think upon.

Sorry, man. Couldn't resist. Too much of an attempt to be profound. It's like being cool. By trying to be cool, you prevent yourself from being cool. Just be, man. (That's deep)

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: December 9, 2003 )

oh yea are a quick study friend Viper9 - that IS the entire point in the pathetic string of ponderous words...thanks for your same thoughts...

( Posted by: C.L. Mareydt [Member] On: December 9, 2003 )

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