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The creative flow that yearns within

is born on butterfly wings.

Too elusive to hold in earthly bonds

It lingers just long enough

to voice it's melody

on winsome whims

in flights unseen.


C.L. Mareydt d23

C.L. Mareydt

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The following comments are for "Elusive"
by C.L. Mareydt

Do you mean "elusive"?

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: December 8, 2003 )

oh yea...
once again...there you go Viper 9...thanks

( Posted by: C.L. Mareydt [Member] On: December 9, 2003 )

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