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Her pale milky white skin
Glistened in the moon lit night
Her silky smooth skin
Rubbed aginst mine
Her pure black hair
Shines in the night
Her green seducing eyes
Make me beg for more
And her cold dark embrace
Soothes me

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King Lucifer


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The following comments are for "Goth Girl"
by King Lucifer

Ohh yeah!
that turns me on !

( Posted by: King Lucifer [Member] On: December 5, 2003 )

nice
hmm..published on my b-day..nice, i like it.

( Posted by: LuckyStarz [Member] On: March 29, 2004 )

Kewl..
Nice stuff.... why dont you extend it?

( Posted by: aryanshukla [Member] On: January 25, 2005 )





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