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diddle dee little bee - this is a life for me --
you see this life is one i make my own and in itself
my love has grown yet the environment has become -
violent!

Bleeding in my own patented way (gushing from all sides) -
ill slide across this room on the spit from your mouth
as you speak on the matter of "what is " -
bullshit 101, i guess were in college now
see my frown and blush because you see it as a smile
for you but in reality your just hanging upside down -
it must be the designer pants.

get help - help!
hes going insane because his mind
is a fire with blazing desires for
the unmentionable candy called attractive
love.
flirtatious dicease called lust has killed
matt and created matthew
bust away from his skin in hopeless wanderings
of his gray world past 2100 hours.
pepsi dangling from his toungue and lips creates
a twist of spit and sugar - bad taste.

its all in good taste from the shore to the mountain side
the picture frame will show you wave-
oh what happy times these pictures show
but that movie you once lived
wont be out on video any time soon --
but my mountain in that picture is insulted
it us much more beautiful in person



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