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Touch me with your thoughts
let me know you care

Hold me with your mind you
say I'm always there

Kiss me with your words of
unforgettable prose

Embrace me as you would your
very finest clothes

Caress me with your eyes with
a mesmerizing gleam

Surprise me with your words that
say we make a good team

Take me to your bed where we can
begin to dine

Drink me as you would the very
finest of wines

Converse with me afterwards about
how it all began

Encircle my essence as we contemplate
the cosmic plan



The following comments are for "Encircle my Essence"
by ilenia

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