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I am drowning
in the Sea of Shit
Swirling beneath
the blood-stained sky
The waves arise
and swallow me
and suck away my life
I feel a corpse
caress my side
and gently pull me down
to slowly dance
the Dance of Death
and wear the blood-stained gown
Death is waiting
at the door
He greets me with
a kiss
We dance together
all night long
He assures that I'm not missed
Death then takes me
to His room
to sing a ghostly song
but instead
He beat me savagely
and raped me all day long
Death threw me back
like a dirty rag
to the lonely Sea of Shit
where I'd try to escape
certain death
Until He called again


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The following comments are for "The Sea"
by larissawise

Larissa?
Is this the Larissa Wise who used to live in Colorado? The same Larissa who's younger sister's Breanna? Well, andway, your poem was good, but I say that with not too much knowledge on it, on a count of I don't read a lot of poems

( Posted by: ArturHawking [Member] On: December 2, 2003 )

cool
Much, much better than your other poem. Brutal and fun.

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: May 14, 2004 )





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