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I feel so lost and empty. I gapping hole is all that remains. You have taken what cannot be replaced. I am felt here in all this waste. Memories flood all around me. The scent you have left on me, drives me wide. My nights are full of wild suprise. I close my eyes and you come alive. I wake to a bleak and blistering cold that I cannot seem to shake. Pain has past and promise is all that remains.

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