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This story Is for one of my best friends, Haley.

Once upon a time there lived a little boy named George, this boy was 10 years old and had brown hair and green eyes.
One day George decided to go fishing with his best friend Steve. Steve was the same age but had black hair and green eyes.
Steve was a really cool guy. On their way to go fishing, George and Steve encountered a large governor who was vicious and very eager to eat these little children. The governor decided to rip their limbs off one by one and slowly devour them. After eating their limbs he took George’s waist and made a hat out of it. The governor had blood dripping down his head because of the gory hat he made. He wasn’t done with the children yet, he violently ripped Steve’s head off and swiftly threw it at Haley, and she grabbed it greedily and started chewing on Steve’s ear, then she bit his lip and ripped it off, she chewed it up and swallowed the lips with great pleasure. Then Haley took the whole head and put it in her mouth and started chewing and eventually ate the whole head. She had blood dripping down her lips, all the way to her chin, and started running down her chest. She enjoyed the wonderful mixed taste of human hair and flesh, along with the eyeballs and teeth. After she was done with her meal she decided to take a bath, so she filled a large area with human blood, and jumped in. She rubbed the raw blood all over her body, and in her hair. If I may say so myself, I would think Haley is a FREAK.. ha!

Haley you’re a great friend. I love poking fun at you luv forever!

King Lucifer


The following comments are for "A Freak Named Haley"
by King Lucifer

well ... hmm
kinda violent eh?

( Posted by: King Lucifer [Member] On: December 1, 2003 )

ahm...not sure what this is...i mean, it could use some would become an interesting little fairy tale.try and do that...a very grim fairytale...

( Posted by: northerain [Member] On: January 28, 2004 )

Just wanted to say..what a wonderful gift to one of your best friends...:-\ ....interesting that you call your self King Lucifer also..(Satan)..nice idea..a little on the graphic side..could use some more content..and like a point to the article itself..

( Posted by: LuckyStarz [Member] On: March 29, 2004 )

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