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In a Temple body once pristine
(desecrated now and loathed by Self)
meet monk brain to monk heart

we cant give this up says heart

but we’ve already lost says brain

listen says heart we’ve a fighting chance
and besides, life’s a fine time
for good I would not know save bad

shut up down there says brain
I've seen more bad than I care for
and I've never met a good-bye I didn't like

you're killing me says heart

that’s the plan says brain

and up goes the temple in flames
(I wont surrender says heart to brain)

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