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I pass splashes of green and yellowing leaves
touches of deep hazel reds add to the scene
Everywhere I look- a photograph is taken
the arching trees bowing to the wind
This place is sacred

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Fairy tales do not tell children that dragons exist. Children already know that dragons exist. Fairy tales tell children the dragons can be killed.


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by Elleta Jo Crismon

woo hoo
Way to go hott chick :)

( Posted by: king lucifer [Member] On: November 30, 2003 )

gee thanx
thanx Penelope. I appreciate it a lot. I don't have much self-esteam as a writer so it means a lot to me. (smile)

( Posted by: Elleta Jo Crismon [Member] On: November 30, 2003 )





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