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Inside the room of the one
Who lives without light
Comes a brightness that only
Arrives when it is touched
Beside the table of junk
Under the cover of words
Surprises those who know
From where it struggles
New and singular to the world
Beyond the height of trees
Trying to listen to the sound
Questions among the cries.

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The following comments are for "Foundling"
by Xlnt_1

Princess Mononoke
I think of the movie Princess Mononoke wen I read this, the spirit of the forest walking above the canopy, graceful and lumbering all at once. It's a beautiful poem, I think. Not a misstep.

Excellent work!

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: November 30, 2003 )

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