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In our great human audacity
Some termed divine prodigy
We speak simple to Doom:
“Go away!” heedless of gloom
In his face around us shadows fall-
Then turn, flailing eyes and limbs all,
Hunted and enmeshed in nice gray lines
That coiled tightened like living vines
Finally entering lips parted in awe
Through throats screaming...Foul!


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The conscious shape reality.


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