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One evening, Steve walked into a very demented looking insane asylum and asked to see his brothers’ friend. His friend was in the asylum for mass-murder and cannibalism. When he got into the square shaped white cell the man greeted him nicely and then violently snapped and killed Steve by snapping his neck. After killing Steve, the man created a large wound so he could easily access blood. The man started wiping blood on the walls, making awkward designs. When the guard back in he gasped and was just about to yell for help when the man said, “ Relax, I was only finger painting.”

King Lucifer


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by King Lucifer

haha. I laughed. Hard. Does this mean I'm sick? lol

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: November 23, 2003 )

thanks, it means alot to me, knowing people actually read this. this started as just a school assignment. but i got addicted :o) waka! ha! thanks everyone i loves you all ;)

( Posted by: King Lucifer [Member] On: November 23, 2003 )

witty, nice ending...awesome

( Posted by: inyoureyes889 [Member] On: November 24, 2003 )

my day
reading your work made may day except that my flash fiction sucked even more after reading yours.

( Posted by: demonspawn666 [Member] On: November 25, 2003 )

well thanks

( Posted by: king lucifer [Member] On: November 26, 2003 )

lost me sorry. perhaps its my age??

( Posted by: Jukeboxhero [Member] On: November 29, 2003 )

What the hell does "WAKA" mean?

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: December 1, 2003 )

Thats pretty cool right there..i like.

( Posted by: LuckyStarz [Member] On: March 29, 2004 )

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