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I hear your name,
In spaces,
Between thoughts.
I see your body,
Inside my dreams.
Without so much a word
To ease my heartache.

I thought I left you behind.
Though time and time again,
You echo in my head.
A broken memory I cannot repair,
Nor can I throw it away,
Because it refuses to fade.
I miss you so....

So many tears shed for you,
I cannot help but let you go.
These feelings, these memories
They've all but washed away.
Like the waves of the ocean,
The echo, I cannot force away
calls to me...
My soul calls your name.

May I have strength to fly again
All this pain will go away
Remember...it goes away
Knowing in my heart the Echo will never fade...


Mark.......Mark.........Mark......





~Bleed~




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