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If I throw caution to the wind, how will I ever find it again?

"God grant me distraction."

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by Darkshine Raven

With a flashlight
Or I've heard your eyeballs work pretty well, too. ;)

( Posted by: Elphaba [Member] On: November 18, 2003 )

so far away!
But Elpha, it's blown so far away! ;)

( Posted by: Darkshine Raven [Member] On: November 18, 2003 )

With a searchlight!
Or put on your jogging shoes and hit the trail, babe.

I'm sitting here cracking myself up. Heh heh heh. :D

( Posted by: Elphaba [Member] On: November 18, 2003 )

Did it come back yet?
I've been thinking about my comments on your story "Fool's Rush In." Just wanted to clarify them. I thought the fellow Pike cried a little too early because when confronted with a gun or knife, I (not that i've ever been confronted by a gun),
tend to have a moment of shock first, then the action or reaction happens. But there are different types of people and everyone reacts differently, so maybe I'm basing my opinion too much on my own experiences. An ear to the ground, and an ear to the winds, if you're still waiting....smithy

( Posted by: smithy [Member] On: November 20, 2003 )

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