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Autumn
by * (Member) - published: November 19, 2003
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Category - Poetry
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The leaves are falling
The trees grow old
They ready for sleep
Their bright prints bold
Across the azure sky



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by *

I do..
agree with her but i love the ambiguity of that line which makes it great.

( Posted by: ryangilr0y [Member] On: March 29, 2005 )





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