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Writing class is boring, so I wrote a bored song while I was in it: *Note: I did not submit this into the lyrics section because I don't think they should be there. I just fluke wrote them out of boredom and I don't believe they truly belong under the lyrics section*

Clouds are dark in the center
But are surrounded by white
By blue and by clear
By dreams of better days

Shaping to forms
Of inner ideas
Seeing a frog isn't rare
But others see that cloud

They view love and sparkle
A tree with apples or pears
Or maybe that frog
Or maybe that frog

Maybe it's easy to forget the sky
To give in to dark clouds and ignore the white
To belive that a rainbow is just out of sight
It is if you want it to
But the sky will stay blue

Crying over rain is pointless
Your tears are naught
Mixed with water
They're gone forever

But hope is a diamond
Forged from coal over years
Pelted by rain
The rain of which you cry

The horizan is small
If the buildings don't move
Away from that frog
Away from that frog

Maybe it's easy to forget the sky
To give in to dark clouds and ignore the white
To believe that a rainbow is just out of sight
It is if you want it to
But the sky will stay blue

Feeling the wind blow while trees whip around
Dropping soft leaves to the everlasting ground
Scraping at concrete with beautiful sound
Life will get better if you want it to
Just know that the sky is forever blue
Just know that I still love you...

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Pushing a lover to love another. Are you turned on?


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by tyrant monkey

Writing Class is Boring
I am a retired writing teacher. You use your moments of boredom well. I wish more of my students had chosen as positive and creative a way to express themselves. I liked the each cloud has a silver lining thread about the content. Its getting greyer and greyer as winter approaches, so this is a gentle reminder not to dwell on the externals of life. Thanks.

( Posted by: EchoMarm [Member] On: October 12, 2006 )





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