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Raise Me


If Iím not dead Iím dying

Iím so sick of trying

Failing, falling

Kick me to the floor

Close and bolt the door

Verse 1

I sift the sand

Find only coal

Seems Iím becoming the dust

That consumes my soul

Melted are my wings of clay

I canít fly

Oh God, it feels like


Verse 2

Cradle me

Catch my tears

I press my face into the cloak of God

You dissolve my fears

You restore my heart

Heal the pain thatís eating me



They roll the stone into place

To seal my doom

Leaving me for dead
In dismal tomb

God find me, save me, love me

Iíve been lying here for three days

Raise me up


Raise me up (Repeat and fade)

Now, what was I saying...

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The following comments are for "Raise Me"
by Brenron

this is very good work,,,thanks for writing and sharing,,,,,,,,bless YOU

( Posted by: coco [Member] On: April 23, 2004 )

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