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Artistís Name

Chorus

Straining to see

Beyond the paint

Is it a portrait

Or a landscape

Only One knew

What His brushstrokes would bring

The Artist reached down and in blood

Signed His name

Verse 1

Father, Iíve created abstraction

Mesmerized by the main attraction

Your methods seem like madness

You choose to work with a broken canvas

(Chorus)

Verse 2

Father, You created a marvelous sculpture

Though time has worn away itís features

The restoring work begins

To bring it back to how it was then

(Chorus)

Two wooden beams

A stone pushed away

Blood from His wounds

A tree and a tomb

The sacrifice saves us today

(Chorus)


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Now, what was I saying...


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The following comments are for "Artist's Name"
by Brenron

artistry
I really like the direstion you took this in. Nice rhyme scheme and cool imagery. I definitely agree this would make a good song. =D

( Posted by: Darkshine Raven [Member] On: November 18, 2003 )





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