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THE GIFT
As one blends into the final perfection
Whisper as the air divides
This gift from father to son
Become

Given in honour
Received in humility
Derived from family
To become


Beautiful as the creation
From father to son
As they become one
Begun


Is the next chapter
Of this unending rapture
Revealed in steel
We are one


Be proud my son
Feel the silence
Of true humility
As you receive

This gift
This blade
This right of
Samurai

This life.




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