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How could anything like that happen, in a town that was so peaceful? The mayor Zaldarr went to bed one night and never woke up. A man that he called his best friend murdered him. The town would soon wake up and find him dead. When the town did, they were in shock and their faces were filled with sadness. Nobody knew something like that could happen in Hajekian. The town put on a search for the murderer but nobody suspected The Advisor (mayorís best friend). The advisor and the mayor were so close, no one suspected him. They looked past him. The advisor then admitted to it. The town then should have turned back to normal. It didnít though. The shock of the people never went away. The strangest thing happened then. Mayor Zaldarr woke up discovering it was all a dream. The first thing he saw when he woke up was the advisor hovering over him.




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The following comments are for "The Mayor's Deja vu"
by kstalte

oh my gosh
your story was SOOO GOOD! it was really eerie and it left me hanging
you should publish this in a book
i love it totally a lot
it was scary too.
I LOVE KRISTI

( Posted by: cebassy [Member] On: November 13, 2003 )

cute
Very interesting story....and it was very suspenseful!!! I almost peed my pants waiting for the ending!!

kristi likes to peel..

( Posted by: akao [Member] On: November 13, 2003 )

good
good story, good use of words!

( Posted by: ilovelit [Member] On: November 13, 2003 )





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