-Just a little something I came up with at a neighbor's party. I actually wrote this down with an orange crayon on a page ripped out from a toddler's coloring book. Hope he doesn't mind-
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I dreamed I was among the stars,
Rising above the earthly scars.
Quietly in my pod I rested,
A twinkling god not to be bested....
Invited to the cosmos chant,
I agreed, trying hard not to vant.
Singing along with my star friends,
We set the universal trend.
Our celestial music soared above all,
Letting others take the fall.
On one side I felt the glory of the triumph,
The other me calling "Traitor nymph!"
Thus came the impede,
Guilt sought me to recede.
Hence I gave my consent-
With the slightest bit of repent.
Not saying good-bye,
I left, tears in my would-be eyes.
Silently, down I drifted,
To the clan from I had once shifted.
Just another fallen star weeping in solitude..
-Review please. By the way, vant means vaunt, just in case you might not know-