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There has to be moments,
That far exceeds this particular moment,
But yet I have still to find it.
Sinking in and sinking out of the times that should be treasured,
Lost in the midst of whatever comes and whatever goes.
See the times fly on and pass
Without even a flinch to acknowledge the growing years.
Maybe it won't matter if I forever pause
Resolved in my thoughts of insignificance.
Dreaming of what there could be
If only I could let go and flow.

Seeing with one eye,
Breathing half a breath,
Where is all that is not there?
And I wonder why my tears are lost,
In a cascade of falling rain.
Shrouded are my thoughts by a mist that blinds and swirl
Around all that could be
If only I could let go and flow.

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