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Reading the first page, was all it took
To make me spellbound, to get me hooked
The killer line, with a word that rings true:
'Watch out, I'm coming for you!'

I become entranced,like I'm in a daze
As I wanted to turn the page
To see what would happen next
Would they be calm, or in a rage?

What a book! What a read!
From that opening line,the writer had sown a seed, to keep me interested
To satisfy my inner need.

Soon it ends and I've had my fix
But not for long, untill I need another kick
Just one more book please?
Come on now, don't tease!

------
Storyteller


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The following comments are for "My Secret Fix"
by Storyteller

Good...
I like this poem. The only negative thing I have to say is that the rhythm between the verses vary somewhat, otherwise it's pretty well written.

( Posted by: Cryptic Rapture [Member] On: November 9, 2003 )





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