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She sees clearly how difficult it is for her to dive deeply into the details, to write out, to describe what she's tasting, seeing, feeling. So locked up, closed, and withdrawn she has been, reigned in so tight...overactive with fear of what the stillness brings. Now living a life that triggers her every outrage, her every instinctual refusal of allowing or denial of compliance with, she suffers. The rage in her prevents the ability to proceed with caution, fearing punishment, and so she stays hidden, unable to progress. She tries to just allow, to accept, to deny, to destroy somehow...nothing works. It is too much sometimes. Tied up in crystal knots around her belly, crawling, clawing at something inside. As she awakens inside of herself the pain rakes like demons claws.

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by satori

Welcomed advice.
Hello there:) The advice is helpful. With so much striving to come out attatched with fear and doubt, it's difficult to keep it simple and to the point. Will try cutting out the wordiness, though. Thank you.
"To ongoing search for true, authentic expression" Namaste~

( Posted by: satori [Member] On: November 15, 2003 )

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