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more fragments, though it would be helpful to be able to see what i have put down before, guess i'll figure that as i go. damn this cramping left hand, someday soon i'll write again with right.


don't want to be my superhero
sometimes one and one
add up to less than zero

fall into that blue vortex


maybe i can work with these tomorrow.

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