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Damaged,Lit up by the hazard lights
A broken heart high above the twilight
Backed into a corner and ready to fight
The teary eyed giants whisper "It's alright,
Rest easy, sleep well.
There was nothing we could do
And we love you."
Running with my brothers and my sisters now,
Don't worry, 'cause you'll catch up with us someday, somehow. And we will all be together again.We will all be together, but 'til then rest easy, sleep well, there was nothing we could do, and we love you



The following comments are for "Police Car Blues"
by tim55b

Police car blues
Sounds like a lot of my friends back in the day, now they are sleeping peacefully. I enjoyed the read



( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: November 7, 2003 )

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