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Alone in a room with nothing to do and nowhere to go
searching, searching for what i do not know
What once was joy has now transformed into depression
Lost all emotions, no longer have a sense of direction
What once was peace is now a sticky mess of confusion
Lost all life within, now living in some sort of illusion
What once was freedom is locked away in chains
Lost all healing, all good feelings, thoughts all wrapped up in pain
What once was Laughter is only heard watered down with tears
Lost all courage all strength, live now being ruled by my fears
What once was fire, now lives an ever fading flame
Lost all hope for change Nothing will ever be the same
Alone in a room with nothing to do and nowhere to go
searching, searching for what i do not know



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The following comments are for "alone in a room"
by modern_day_holocaust

good...
A lovely one here. It has a weird flow, it's bleak and somehow...i don't know how. Keep up the good work.

( Posted by: Dew Of Blood [Member] On: November 6, 2003 )

Me
Your poem totally described me in so many ways. I was really touched by how deep you dug into your soul just to pull those words out. You were like almost living in your poetry. It's so neat. I loved it. You really kept me wanting to read more so I can't wait to see more of your writing. Keep going on. You have a special gift and a talented way to express yourself.
HoneyT.

( Posted by: iluvjojom [Member] On: July 16, 2004 )





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