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I sit here waiting
...waiting for the moment,
for the words i dread
are every so near,
soon they shall be whispered in my ear,
by the one, and only I love,
for he is so near
and yet so far.
Is the day today
or is it tomorrow?
For the day my heart
breaks in two,
is only a moment away.
My love is all i have,
for he keeps me going,
and happyness he brings.
But yet hes about to go,
leaving me alone
again.
For the last time i shall feel.
I have grown stong,
for my past has helped me
...but yet some reason
I feel so weak, about to break,
going to snap.
He is my love,my best friend
the holes he's about to leave
in my heart will never be filled,
the tears in my eyes,
will never go away.
Charley, your always in my heart
and in my mind,
for I shall always love you.


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