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Today when you awaken
you will find me gone
but please don't get too shaken
I'm just sitting in the john!
Last nights chili dinner
wasn't the friendly kind.
I thought it was a winner
but, now I'm in a bind!
oh good your awake
now help me up
my but is stuck like a suction cup!


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The following comments are for "ON THE POT"
by TB51

on the pot
This one made me laugh out loud. You really have a talent for comedy. Thanks for brightening up a gray day.

( Posted by: tim55b [Member] On: November 5, 2003 )

Pot
That was hilarious. A poem about sitting on the John, how very creative. That last line really cracks me up. Nice write.

( Posted by: Concept [Member] On: September 25, 2004 )





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