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Tired and sleepy,
lieing in my bed,
dreams of my special
someone...fill my head.
Without a care,
without any worrys..
sleeping silently
though the night i lie,
I wish it were so,
with peaceful dreams
of fairys and candy,
memorys of friends
of whom i love.
If only i could say it true,
for the fantsy i have
dreamed, would become
a reality, but insted
i lie awake and think
of what could have been
between the two.
But they are done and over,
and one is gone,
the other moved on,
onto another ....
that one is in love with another
and the lonely girl
just wants to find
someone she can trust,
someone that makes her feel loved.


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The following comments are for "Attempted Slumber"
by SockRocker

sounds important
The last two lines make the poem sound very important to you.

I think this poem would sound awesome if you stuck in a simple rhyming scheme. It'd make it sound more musical. And music is what would be great for this kind of poem.

( Posted by: PsychicNoodle [Member] On: November 5, 2003 )





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