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drip
im upside down
im floating here
my palms drip sweat
theres lots to fear
my pupils huge
my eyes so wide
from every little
thing i hide
drop
the colors bright
swirl around
i see shadows
on the ground
sounds are twisted
and echo too
if you were here
if you only knew
sleep




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The following comments are for "mirrorrorrim"
by johnny

mirrorrorrim
Interesting piece of poetry. I enjoyed this a great deal. Very creative. Thank you for sharing. ~Pam

( Posted by: PamelaALamppa [Member] On: August 30, 2004 )





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