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Watch my blood run like insanity,
Look what you have made of me.
A feeble man, with feeble bones
A paranoid skeleton.

Hit me, hit me.
It痴 all you ever do,
Why would it make a difference?
Even if its them, me and you?

Hit me, hit me.
I know its what you want to do,
You weak pitiful man,
Hit me, hit me.

Oh look,
I知 concussed,
My blood is pouring from my head,
My head is heavy, yet light as air.

Hit me, hit me.
I知 on the floor,
You池e hitting me,
And I知 begging for more.

Hit me, hit me.
I知 dying now,
Are you a man yet?
Hit me, kill me, I知 dead.

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