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Just another bloody day
Filled with screams
Delightful cries

Stack the bodies high
Another notch to the belt
Live it all just to deny

Some small child
Poor dear lost his way
Drives the bloodlust ever wild

Nothing to compare
To the way the blood runs
Drenching the pretty blond hair

Just another murder
Something so beautiful
Delightful cries


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The following comments are for "Delightful Cries"
by modern_day_holocaust

Heavy
Heavy, straight-forward poem without any fancy language. Loss of innocense. I like the plain & simple quality of it. Won't win any prizes, but be glad you wrote it.

( Posted by: gomarsoap [Member] On: November 2, 2003 )





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