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Trust is wasted away,
Nothing shall be the same.
Everything will crumble into dust.
slowly learning not to trust
but still i suffer.
Entombed inside this coffin,
This breathless vault of screams.
Beating the sanity out of me
I am a child of the night...
Dwelling in the darkest corners of existence
Enveloped in the velvet folds of memory
Alone with my pain, piercing my white flesh
like a merciless thorn from a black rose
the only survivor of my innocence.
Tears of crimson forever stain my cheeks
Testimonial of the misery to which I am doomed
to suffer in loneliness for all eternity...

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