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A duststorm blanketed the city today.

What I thought yesterday were clouds was in fact the first of the finer dust particles.

I stayed inside till dusk, organising a prologue. Had to work then.
Long days..feeling tired tonight..the dust crunches between my teeth.

So tired..

Eyes drooping..

...sleepy, so sleepy..

..asleep now..the fingers type automatically unable to stop..

..so i got a few comments done today. I'm working systematically through the postings when i can, working backwards and forwards from my first posting. That's in Poetry which is the quickest to deal with.

..i'll pick some random postings from different genres and alternate between
these and anyone who takes the time to give me some feedback..sorry to anyone who has posted something on mine. I'll get there.

..i also check other peoples Blogs and profiles, and i'll check back periodically to see if i've made any sense, mistakes, misinterpretations with any comments.

..thanks to the staff here again..

..in return I'll be loyal to the site and respectful to the members and if I ever make tons of money...

..feeling wakey...so wakey...

...waking up...wide awake..

hitting submit!


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Like the grasses showing tender faces to each other, thus should we do, for this was the wish of the Grandfathers of the World.

Black Elk




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The following comments are for "the order"
by smithy

tired in the storm
Hi Smithy. I'm feeling the same way as you, except I got the snowstorm. It was awful to get up and scrape windows at 6:00 in the morning. You stay awake, I'm sleepy now.

Kimberly

( Posted by: kimberly bird [Member] On: October 29, 2003 )

slipped away
Yes, sorry kim i slipped away,
and fell into deep consciousness,
you see i'm half a world and half a day,
upside-down-under making ZZZZZZZ

( Posted by: Smithy [Member] On: October 30, 2003 )





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